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FIRST DRAFT
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SECOND DRAFT
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| Quilters Guild meeting is full
of women. |
Quilters Guild meeting is full
of men. |
| Spy recruiter is man in business
suit with dark sunglasses. |
Spy recruiter is woman in business
suit with dark sunglasses. |
| Protagonist is Evelyn Hudson, who
does not seem to understand her husband's power tools and his other objects
of manliness. |
Protagonist is James Hudson, who
does not seem to understand his wife's power tools and her other objects
of manliness. |
| Mrs. Kilroy stays at home while
her husband works. |
Mr. Kilroy stays at home while
his wife works. |
| Mr. Kilroy smokes cigars and lends
a "thing" to Evelyn's husband. |
Mrs. Kilroy smokes cigars and lends
a "thing" to James' wife. |
| Evelyn Hudson wears a blouse. |
James Hudson wears a blouse. |
| Evelyn's husband reaches into her
panties. |
James' wife reaches into his panties. |
| Evelyn seems clueless about world
affairs; her husband is more interested in drinking beer. |
James seems clueless about world
affairs; his wife is more interested in drinking beer. |
| Author came to realize the story
was stereotypical in its descriptions of men and women. |
Author wonders if the story makes
any sense. |